Friday, August 17, 2012

A Penny In The Pocket Comments

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There's a man standing upright hidden
He's asking for some spare change
The onlookers give and go
Remorse or without its hard to say
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Anthony Han
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Bri Edwards 17 November 2012

antbony, tony, or one sail? ? i wonder which one was 19...the giver or getter (of the penny; i understand that you both got something) . i also give money, sometimes without being asked, but one lady asked if she could have my hat. i had to draw the line somewhere! thanks for sharing. i enjoyed this. bri it goes in my mypoemlist.

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John Brown 16 November 2012

A good poem, well written. There is a saying - Never judge a book by the cover - this goes for homeless books too.

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