Tuesday, May 2, 2017

A Pencil Work I Need Comments

Rating: 5.0

I do not go where you go,
I do not walk on the ways you walk.
Your beauty,
I do not discuss with my friends.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Khalid Saifullah 03 May 2017

A page from book of conjugal life nicely and honestly painted as a poem.

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Nosheen Irfan 03 May 2017

A profound work, reflecting your deep insight. Relationships are important in life but man sometimes feels helpless in the face of time.10

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Rajnish Manga 02 May 2017

and I lie, I have forgotten her, but still I feel someone is chasing me.....// The images of pencil work of the past are still there, though, not as clinching as it would a couple of years back. Love speaks for itself. Thanks.

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