Thursday, April 9, 2009

**a Pencil Form Daddy! ** Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have a pencil,
My daddy gave it,
He brought it from the council,
Where he works and his life is fit.
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Fathmath Sana
Dad
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Mamta Agarwal 30 July 2009

excellent composition.gift of a pencil is metaphorical. to draw, to learn and to aspire. reach your dreams. a treasured gift.written in a lighter vein, it has hidden meanings. well crafted poem. in the beginning i felt i was reading a limerick. 10 MAMTA

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Saadat Tahir 28 July 2009

on the face of it the poem is great... but i'm thouroughly confused...there is more toit then meets the eye any way nice poem cheers

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nd when it was done, My Dad's Nice Pencil, had shown the proof! ...... after all it is gift from dad and every child preserves it as holy gift.... very good write.....10 read mine also o, mother, papa do u know? and papa you too? u will appricaite its reation.

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Shashendra Amalshan 21 May 2009

this one is ssoooooo very cute..thanks....

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 11 April 2009

the poem speaks for itself well penned and a great tribute -mel

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