I have a pencil,
My daddy gave it,
He brought it from the council,
Where he works and his life is fit.
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on the face of it the poem is great... but i'm thouroughly confused...there is more toit then meets the eye any way nice poem cheers
nd when it was done, My Dad's Nice Pencil, had shown the proof! ...... after all it is gift from dad and every child preserves it as holy gift.... very good write.....10 read mine also o, mother, papa do u know? and papa you too? u will appricaite its reation.
the poem speaks for itself well penned and a great tribute -mel
excellent composition.gift of a pencil is metaphorical. to draw, to learn and to aspire. reach your dreams. a treasured gift.written in a lighter vein, it has hidden meanings. well crafted poem. in the beginning i felt i was reading a limerick. 10 MAMTA