Saturday, November 19, 2011

A Pen Comments

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A pen has a nib and a cap,
And when i miss it, it falls on my lap.
I write with it,
And stick my hand to it,
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Ria Varghese
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Binish Cd 04 January 2012

you have expressed your ideas in a better way.....good writing, , , , , , , ,

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Stella Mary 03 January 2012

You're poem is good. But it would have been better if you used some tough words in it.

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Vipins Puthooran 19 November 2011

A cute poem, , , I like this one.. May your quill bless you with a lot of poems! God bless you dear, ,

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Pari Dharawat 19 November 2011

Nice poem about pen.... Keep writing

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