Wednesday, March 9, 2016

A Peaceful Sunrise Comments

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the darkness of the east is fading
a glow that claims that hope exists

the memories of night confound
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Barry Middleton
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Nosheen Irfan 10 March 2016

Another amazing write. Morning brings a sense of peace and hope with it. I love it that your thoughts always turn to the well being of people. Awesome imagery to describe dawn. And closing lines add to the poem's worth.

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Barry Middleton 10 March 2016

Glad you liked it. This was a new one.

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