Friday, September 23, 2011

A Peaceful Moment Comments

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Gently caressing, with the faintest of smiles
And an almost loving look, as though holding a baby
He draws on satisfaction as his lips envelope the golden tip
Sucking his poison, from a land far away, to his lungs
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PAUL COLVIN
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Shadow Girl 06 October 2011

interesting write...good metaphors. -SG

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