Sunday, September 10, 2006

A Peace They'D Find Comments

Rating: 5.0

I threw pennies out to the pigeons,
This morning.
They did not know what to do!
Had I flew the 'coop' with scorning?
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Garnet Robbie 11 October 2009

yup - liking 'em all, i'd say

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Greenwolfe 1962 19 April 2008

Your creativity continues to amaze. I wish I had as much. GW62

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Diane Violet 31 October 2006

A good deed in calming those ruffled feathers, I'm glad it worked. Very nice poem Lawrence. All the best, Diane

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Foster Blaine 21 September 2006

A lovely concept. I hope this is a true story. A truly original piece; it's good to see that here. peace

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Ruby Root 21 September 2006

Hi Lawrence, Really Nice poem. I love it. Creative and original. Take care.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 10 September 2006

LOL... Shaun, that's okay!

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Shaun Williams 10 September 2006

Really nice.. Like this very much, Sorry i dont have much 'critical advice' SHaun

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