A Peace Of War- Comments

I like the touch soft of your poems.. that's good writing

Louie, you paint both irony of war and its supporters. I will never forget the film 'Oh What a LOvely War' with the generals conducting WW1 from Brighton Pier and how everytime a soldier died, a bright red poppy grew on the spot he fell. Thank you for writing this. Bob

A stunning piece of poetry.....I read twice....to understand the world of meaning in that compact structure...