A Peace Beyond Poem by Laurie hill

I love the way this is written...like long, languid brush strokes that paint a vivid scene...wonderful

Exquisite, poignant, haunting, intriguing... leaves the reader pondering, wondering, wanting more...

A hautingly beautiful poem that really touched me deeply. I loved your devoted imagery, and enjoyed it greatly.

Hauntingly beautiful.As with all of your work there is a gentleness here.A sensitivity that is rare in a man's work. It enchants me. Susan

Susan was right.. you are good

Beautifully mysterious and heartfelt 😀

Such a beautiful, heart-sick lullaby as I've never read before. It's so classic I'd expect to open up any poetry anthology and find it there on the first pages. Truly awesome. And the opacity just adds even more to the majesty.

Yeah laurie I really like this a lot. Can I recite it at one of the venues I go to.-10

You are a talented wordsmith Laurie... I like the mystery in this piece 10 plussssssssss Tracy

But if i hear the sobbing, from the shadows that pursue me and the voice that calls me softly, calls my name. Then I must turn and answer, tell the reason for my leaving, tell her gently that it's me, not her, to blame. ..................... wowwww, this is a stunning write, Laurie...oh, i think, i will be your regular reader now.. Love this piece..