Sunday, April 2, 2006

A Pawn Comments

Rating: 4.2

Why did you take my life by storm, wrap me up in ribbons
then use me as a pawn. Twice you were there and twice you
went away, both times it was my life that had to pay.
Brought up through childhood with no mother by my side.
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Willow Moon Pearce 05 April 2006

lovely poem sylvia - I guess things like this happen in life....regards..wilow

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Sandra Fowler 02 April 2006

Powerful, sad and beautifully written. You felt this one from the heart. Love, Sandra

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Scarlett Treat 02 April 2006

Darling Rosie: If this did not happen to you, then you have told it very well for those to whom it did. I know of two different women to whom this happened, and it is the very saddest thing to see - those women who never felt that mother's love, and searched for it all their lives. Scarlett

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Duncan Wyllie 02 April 2006

It rings a familiar tune.My Mum and Father split up when I was just 18 months old and yes, It does affect the young and yes it really did hurt for many years.Even now the Child within is still going through the healing process.A brilliant depiction of a love divided.Thankyou Sylvia for touching on this subject as many are still out there in the cold. Love Duncan

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