Friday, October 18, 2013
A Pause In Time Comments
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12-Myriads of memories gushing
ashore...holding on to them
sleazy...they wash away...
damp as a freshly - paused sob
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Roseann Shawiak
19 October 2013
Very good imagery. Thank you for sharing your poem. RoseAnn
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7/20/2025 3:58:38 PM # 1.0.0
This being your first poem posted here, I cordially welcome to this poetry forum and look forward to seeing many more in the days ahead. This is a beautiful poem, with well chosen words and nicely drawn imagery. Please read some of mine too and offer a few words as feedback. I'll appreciate. Wish you all the best.