' A Path With No End ' (Thought) Comments

Life's journey is such that we do not have a second chance. This discernment comes late and we lead our lives haphazardly.. nice one

An exceptional poem; expresses the soul well.

Very nice poem that expresses the deepest feeling of oneself. Keep up the good work...

Very prescient, your exploring a very large existential mountain that everyone goes, but I like your approach. But what happens when we get to the dead end? Do we turn around and run away so we can try again? To try to win a race with no end. Or is the dead end ware our true journey begins? I could see this sung.

wow thats deep. makes me think. it kinda reminds me of a poem called path less taken its by a famous author but i cant remember his name at the moment: / but anyway this is a really good poem i really like this one :)