Friday, March 26, 2010

A Path To Risky Love Comments

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Her lungs ache
from being so close
to her flaming heart
her breath comes
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Alyssa Lippi
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Lanesa Mantia 04 May 2010

This is really good. I like it alot....and it seems like every girl who reads this can relate..........wonderfully done!

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Adrian Cordova 17 April 2010

This is wonderfuly written

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Afzal Shauq 15 April 2010

lovely is this poem..enjoyed..lovely

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Joshua Daukei 09 April 2010

this is very well writen

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Christopher Tiganescu 09 April 2010

this is very well done

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