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hey Dana.... soeday we will sing this song hmmmmmm nice song it is..10

this song is a good one..meaningful...and i congratulate you for writing a poem in a song..good job..grace

a good song indeed...liked it...well written poem..appreciate you..10++++

that is really good.

love befuddles by mistake love resurrects by resilience as knowing the mistake, yet passionate, write,10+++, keep on writing, thanks for sharing

yes u have to check for the grammar....but it is good....u can post it at songwritingfever.com....and u can post any song there..where music coposers are looking for words to compose music for.....great piece dear....keep writing.

not bad, but yes grammar gotta be checked!

Dana it's a good start but hope you watch out more for English grammars