Tuesday, March 31, 2009

A Path’s Logic Comments

Rating: 2.2

As I walk the path,
I see its ahead of me,
It is also behind me.
I have seen it now.
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jathin aka jesuzz
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Nimal Dunuhinga 11 April 2009

Indeed it's logical Jathin.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 06 April 2009

yea path...........pathwalker and the goal are one..............Good Write..........

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Alex Gomez 05 April 2009

Wow, what a conundrum to understand initially. But as I rescanned the text, I realized the depth of your words and the complexity of the path. Very brilliantly designed poem.

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Desiree Burdick 05 April 2009

wow what a deep path your walking in i like the poem though

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 05 April 2009

Very cleverly penned, yes a path goes ahead and we leave it behind and what we do along this path...time will tell? Cindy

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Vyshak Aka Y_shag? 05 April 2009

absolution is yours my brother....respects..........

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Has the PATH lead you to the CLARITY of the WAY AHEAD........! ? ! WonderFULL thoughts and ideas are IMAGED in this verse. Kudos :) -shree

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Anjali Sinha 04 April 2009

nice poem a soul searching one -10 anjali

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