Saturday, June 20, 2009

A Path Comments

Rating: 3.0

lead me not to a path of righteousness, but, rather
lead me to guidance and understanding

bring forth a truth, so contageous and colorful
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M Rene Riel
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Indira Renganathan 30 January 2010

Good ending of a plea....10

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 14 October 2009

Well structured, and despite its brevity, , full of wisdom

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Lynn Glover 15 July 2009

Rene: This poem is well structured and well written and yes I'll be your friend. We don't need any more leaders or followers we need friends. Please, if time permits read my poem 'A Friend' Thanks Lynn

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Goran Gustafsson 20 June 2009

'Be not my leader nor my follower / just be my friend. Words that carry much wisdom. There are to many self-proclaimed leaders and to many idolizing followers in this world.

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M Rene Riel

M Rene Riel

Plattsburgh New York USA
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