A Patchwork Of Soul Comments

Your poem really rocks, beautiful x

beautiful poem! ! ! i like this poem a whole lot

I love the last three lines, I can tell they have come deep within the soul and yet tells so much loud and clear. Beautifully done

John, there's a smart rhythm to this verse and meaningful thoughts too. That's a great combination to have in a poem. Frank

This poem is amazing in its rhythm and musicality. I agree with your ideas about poetry :) Beautiful. A.

hello Wojj..this is an splendid quilt you v woven indeed..and i know this site, some poems here can heal many sore hearts.......and don't stay silent, ..write such beautiful verses to entertain our souls....A++ cheers shan

John You gathered wisdom From ageless springs And have presented us A quilt with a lilt Made with satin and silk Smooth and soft Your poem unfurled Truth in comfortable terms That my soul readily yearns To reach the silent bliss! Angel

An amazing poem..........silent some times speak. My sincere thanks for your kind sharing.

the rhymes are amazing..and the meaning inspiring..beautiful write!

A beautiful rhythmic poem - the last line is a stunner! (Last three lines, too) ...art is indeed a wonderful thing.

You're sure are right about the patchwork, I sometimes think, when it's dark, I'm a bit of a Frankenstien.

'When the tongue is so silent the ears are then healed, In amazement in wonder the silence is bliss, As thoughts turn to rainbows as the Self sends a kiss.' - Very noteworthy lines indeed. You have caught the right spirit. You serve your poem straight from the heart to the heart of the reader.

In amazement and in wonder I read this patchwork ballad, how easy it seems when you conduct it - Brilliant indeed

I fink you're a pretty talented writer and thinker mister, having had a mewander through your gear. I did have a bit of problem chewing the England one though - a slight constitutional defect on my part perhaps... But an entertaining page or three of poems in prospect good sir...

Wojja, That was a WHOLE beauty....not a patchwork. Well done, my friend. Very enticing, musical..Ah, my heart sings again!

Wondrful, wonderful for several times.. I totally agree with Sandra Fowler...Your style sounds very musical...seems to be an inborn quality...great and thank you very much for sharing this lovely piece

a marvelous poem..well expressed..nice verses and smooth flow to read...10

True poetry knows no barriers of time, distance, or culture. Excellent write. More than worthy of a ten. I like the musical effect of your rhymes. Warm regards, Sandra

A beautifully expressed poem.