Tuesday, October 20, 2020

A Passionate Night Comments

Rating: 4.7

The bright moon bows down
To the wildness of the sea
Stars quit from shining.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Rob Lamberton 02 February 2023

I love the plural application of words in poetry. Multiplies the beauty of the poem and the pen that crafted it!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 July 2021

Brilliantly expressed! A short poem with magnificent images

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Anjandev Roy 26 July 2021

Simply exceptional

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Varsha M 26 December 2020

Beautiful bow of moon to wilderness of sea in the wuietness and stillness thst starry sky departs

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Kesav Easwaran 15 December 2020

A super romantic imagery, Rose. The rousing sea and the moon bending! More than 5 stars to your super poem making ability

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Suresh Kumar Ek 28 November 2020

A perfect union Beautifully portrayed. Rose is a Rose is a Rose

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Mahtab Bangalee 09 November 2020

The bright moon bows down To the wildness of the sea Stars quit from shining.// wow superb imagery; beautiful expression one moonlight is enough no need thousands of far stars nearest is best!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 November 2020

To MyPoemList this gem of a poem, true fascinating to read time and again.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 November 2020

this lovely created poem shows indeed a passionate night, must I admit. Imaginning What a wonderful atmosphere and appearance when the moon bows down to the wildness of the sea, the stars are cooperating and make the sphere more passionate. 5 Stars Full Vote. I will be reading this fantastic poem time and again. I am mesmerized.Poems are wonderous things, they have different reactions, but one thing remains the same: the reader loves the beauty that resides in this gem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 November 2020

I cite you here dear great Poetess: The bright moon bows down To the wildness of the sea Stars quit from shining. A Passionate Night...........the Title makes me wish to read more and times again, .

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 October 2020

Wonderful observation! Beautifully put. Top 🌟

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Shaun Cronick 25 October 2020

Rose Marie short and sweet but magnificently nice and neat. A more than well written poem with passion as its centre and shining gemstone. Many thanks for writing and sharing and also five brightly bold shining stars. Take care and enjoy life. I wish you well and the loved ones around you.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 23 October 2020

A beautifully imagined, romantic poem.

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Khairul Ahsan 22 October 2020

'To the wildness of the sea' is perhaps a metaphor here.

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Akhtar Jawad 21 October 2020

A night full of passions, a night full of moonlight, a night with stars dim before a moon is better than a a sunny day. A nice description of such a night with all the magics of Rose Marie Juan Austin.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 October 2020

A well thought poem. Truly superb and poetic...5 stars*****

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Cowboy Ron Williams 20 October 2020

So the stars quit shining because of the moon? An interesting concept!

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 October 2020

Romantic night with the muse of the moon! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anjandev Roy 20 October 2020

Wonderful short work......thank u........anjandev roy.

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Yiyan Han 20 October 2020

Imaginatively passionate with 5*

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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