A Passion Comments
She is falling softly on the floor with thin muslin
Taken down nervously from shoulders.
As will o' the wisps on swamps
Hands turning white with glow of the moon
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Fantastic flight of emotions entwined with the passion for confluence. Excellent poem.10 points.
really most passionate, eloquent flow of emotion across wonderful imagery interlinking, wrought ingenious across lucidity, heart gets enlightened by glow as luscious, lovely one,10+++, thanks for sharing
That altogether climbed peaks they will record the image Of unrivalled champion Of elaborate caresses and delights of imagination................... oh what a kind of imagery! ! ! love when mills through by desire rose seems to behold grace of beauty passion yet rushes on to hill top by mystery..................elegance love marches over the conquered, superbly narrated by metaphors unequalled, mystery seems to befuddled by wishes when blazes the glory, as a luscious matrix always flows across the heart, wonderful write that deserves more beyond limitation,10+++++, thanks for sharing
Excelent, wonderful EROTIC. I know it in Polish. It are reading very well. He is giving all shades back to passion :) Mastery. It is worthwhile reading.
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9/4/2025 10:16:33 PM # 1.0.0
Lost in delight; with the muse of life and love. Thanks for sharing.