Thursday, September 12, 2013

A Passing Thought Comments

Rating: 4.3

A languid stroll by the deserted esplanade,

Watching the battery of waves glide past the jagged shores,
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Ranadeb Bhattacharya
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Ramesh Rai 07 October 2013

Composition of words are outstanding. a beautiful write.

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Debolina Chakrabarti 28 September 2013

What better can I offer a poet, than few verses of my creations? ! - Then when I had almost given up, you came by! ! All lost hopes, and courage gathered back. I learned to see things once again which I had stopped to see long back. Somebody showed me my inner light, reconnected me with my inner self! Your presence is a blessing- a constant place of harmony, Heals for all wounds I wore in this long stride. But you say, the walk is not yet over! - You want me to be walking still… This walk is all joy, as the roads are not dark, now. Every difficult bends of it are now smoothed, and lighted with your presence! !

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Deborah Hernandez 15 September 2013

Amazing words put down.. Heart felt words of ur's, , , Deb Tata

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Deborah Hernandez 15 September 2013

Awesome writing Ranadeb.. I think u put fantastic words together and ur feelings about things.. God Bless.. Ur Friend Always Deb Tata..

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Michael Oliver 13 September 2013

Almost an old man's poem - recognize the nostalgic mood that runs through this the quiet pathos that ebbs and flows like a gentle tide - but it ends positively - you are so lucky to be young and not steeped in the cynicism of my years.. I enjoyed this love the moments of colour that accent the odd line - you have a voice Ranandeb

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Kolkata, India
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