Tuesday, August 15, 2017

A Passing Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

A day passes by in a steady pace
Turning and returning in succession
Alternately changing courses with the night
Moving with time in the cycle of life
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Nudershada Cabanes
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Short but sweet and significant!

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Simply beautiful. You have the gift of milking meaning from the mundane. A passing day- counting the blessings that comes your way. Well done!

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Perdita Young 10 March 2018

Turning and returning in succession Alternately changing courses with the night Moving with time in the cycle of life - - - - Can almost feel the disappearing time while reading. Great write.

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Nudershada Cabanes

Nudershada Cabanes

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