Wednesday, July 22, 2015

A Passing Cloud Comments

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Blithe and carefree as a wandering cloud
He drifted one day into my life;
How sweet were the hours Heaven allowed,
Tranquil - even though misery was rife
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Lora Colon
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Manonton Dalan 17 January 2016

there are more beautiful clouds coming as long as this planet is turning.

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Roseann Shawiak 04 August 2015

Intriguing memories dwelling within images of a cloud, even after the rain falls from within it, the memory is retained. Such quiet splendor residing in every line of beautiful imagery, continuing to tell the story, sharing it through poetical verses on starless nights. Quite somber and beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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David Lessard 02 August 2015

Nice poetry here. Clouds shape our thoughts by their structure, as does love.

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Savita Tyagi 22 July 2015

Lovely poem Lora. Some clouds leave a lasting memory. Even rains can't wash away its impact. Thanks for sharing.

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Kassem Oude 22 July 2015

How stupendous was your cloud Shade reassuring as cool breeze Heart and soul were dumbfound Wild gale swept it too far in seas

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Lora Colon

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