Tuesday, July 4, 2017

A Passing Breeze Comments

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Cry...cry long and hard
for me, Then forget me as
Just a passing breeze
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David Whalen
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Abderrahmane Dakir 13 July 2017

Wonderful lines concern separation and the short life on this Earth. Thanks for sharing

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Seamus O Brian 04 July 2017

Poignant and provocative in its very effective brevity. Bravo, good poet! S

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 July 2017

This poem is small but very deep and this scribbles heart. A perfect image is accompanied to explain this. In separation many cry. Then gradually they forget as passing breeze. Life faces many obstacles gets pain and sorrow. An amazing sharing is done...10

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