Friday, September 15, 2006

A Passer By. Comments

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Once i asked a star,
why my love is so far?
She said: why would you care any way?
He left you and ran away..
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Eman Awad
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Kesav Easwaran 26 September 2008

'But my star kept on saying, don't trust the passer by. And i kept on praying, for him to come back and try'... good poetic lines these...a good poem ending with a beautiful message...good rhyming style, Eman...10

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