I like this because it is complete and cutting, has a definite point/idea, and starts with a premise ending in a conclusion. The lines are relevant to the idea, not 'hanging' or a rambling or words and your arrangement of the verses is just right. Great work! 10+
Cynthia Buhain
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I like this because it is complete and cutting, has a definite point/idea, and starts with a premise ending in a conclusion. The lines are relevant to the idea, not 'hanging' or a rambling or words and your arrangement of the verses is just right. Great work! 10+ Cynthia Buhain