Tuesday, December 1, 2009

A Partner Comments

Rating: 5.0

A partner’s got to have your back
No handshake cloaked handout
He’s got to be there
Thick or thin
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Robert Leary
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 01 December 2009

I like this because it is complete and cutting, has a definite point/idea, and starts with a premise ending in a conclusion. The lines are relevant to the idea, not 'hanging' or a rambling or words and your arrangement of the verses is just right. Great work! 10+ Cynthia Buhain

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