A Parting Prayer Divine... Comments

Amazing prayer chant…Uncle ‘How can I read, what you have scribed /There on my parting line, apart? ’ Such earnestness will reach to Master …and poet’s voidness will be fulfilled by Bliss Because God is ‘quick-eared’…ever minuscule of prayer reaches Him…as I’ve read in book of Ramakrishna where He says, ‘He can hear the jingle of ankle bangle of ant’ 10/10+ hf Ms. Nivedita UK

Such good use of alliteration makes the prayer sound melodious. Fantastic!

your prayers to cleanse all the body parts would never go in vain....The lord shall listen your cry....

Nice prayer: good thought - simple, but expressed in a unique way. Vanita.

You are indeed a good bargainer, knowing perfectly well that even a fraction means.... I think it's a great prayer and well compiled, may God always be kind to you!

good poetry in that it comes from your heart sir

A prayer of humility. That divine part is required to make our existence complete...without which we are just products of mechanized thinking

An honest worshiper gets divine touch.Good luck!

lovely piece. may God Almighty bless you with his rewards today and always.

ur poem is very good indeed, i have yet to read ur other poems

very well written poem(prayer) ......thanks

A truly beautiful write Kesav, humbling to read, 10 Lynda xx

what a beautifull and intense prayer.loved it surya

enjoyed it but hte usual hindu prayer but very well written

touching write...honest prayer.. meaningful thoughts.. offering God your All... very divine piece... 10+++ maia

beautiful prayer... I'm sure you will get more than you bargain for... :)

yes, i feel the very same! wonderfully written prayer! love it!

A beautfully written prayer, eloquent and graciously humble - wonderful Kesav.

a prayer i will remember thanks 10

Kesav! I love not just part of this poem & prayer - But all; start to finish! ! Thank you for this splendid read! ! Best regards, *10*! ! Friend Thad