A Part Of Two Comments

You got some talent! !

this is so deep and beatuiful.

your thoughts flowed very well in this peice, flowing stedily from thinking to questioning. that is good in a young writer like yourself

a 10 for this ammmmmazing composition.

nice job that is an awsome and heart felt poem

Timothy, excellent write! I certainly couldn't write like this at 15- not sure I can now.... keep up the good stuff....

a thought provoking poem the rays of your love are threads with which your stitching heart sews you 2 together the highest path is surrender to God's will about whom to be with.. few of us achieve that path

Very deep it really makes one think. I really enjoyed it!

hey Tim, beautiful imagery with the sun and the skies and the light in her eyes what else is there to sew! ! ! ! ! ! ! when your only a part of two You have great potential though so very young--very matured and intelligent keep up your beatiful writes. I love to read your poems.+++++++++++++++++++100000000000000000000000 love anjali

Nice poem. I like the poetic whirlpool in the first paragraph.

I like the imagery...be sewn together seems like a fresh idea. Nice work. Hugs, dee

This is really good...You and the Girl share the same heart.