Friday, December 23, 2011

A Part Of Me(Thought) Comments

Rating: 5.0

You are on the outside looking in,
You never frown,
You never grin.
When you are down,
...
Read full text

Poet of the River
COMMENTS
Heather Wilkins 05 June 2013

A good read. We are a part of the whole. meaning we are part of each other.

0 0 Reply
Daniel Warner 08 March 2012

I think that 'Cosmic Dreamer' understated that comment; this poem is a wonder to a lone soul. Someone out there will take this as motivation. If you can read some of my poems and you'll see what I mean. -Warner

0 1 Reply
Cosmic Dreamer 26 December 2011

I think we are all part of each other making up a wonderful whole... Nice poem...

1 0 Reply
Poet of the River

Poet of the River

California, but move around a lot.
Close
Error Success