I still remember heartache like
I'd never felt before,
With every hour that passes by
I miss you more and more,
...
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Deep sad feelings expressed in a passionate piece of poetry written with clarity of thought and mind. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing Andrew.
To say that life can occasionally be discouraging would be a barbarous understatement.
An enjoyable piece; appreciated the message and how you wove the title into each stanza; nicely done. -Joe Breunig, Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory
A heart wrenching poem or is it a song--- whatever its touchyyyyyyyyyy ++++10 regards anjali (do read some of mine when time permits)
That was amazing, seriously. It reallyu showed emotion on such a high scale. That was just amazing....
I can relate to this deeply touching piece, it's good to open your heart and speak of your loss, it touched me Andrew well done, Lynda xx
Sorrow, loss and pain superbly expressed here. The verse form is admirable and the whole conveys human suffering. Great Poetry!
A passionate tribute to a loved one! Excellent style. You may appreciate PoemHunter's Hazelmarie Elliott. Thanks.
Andrew this brought tears to my eyes. What a well painted picture of your broken injured heart, this is very very good please know that...... May your days be filled wiht happiness....... Bonnie Collins
This is breathtakingly well-penned. A song, a poem? Either way it is magnificent. I bet many a reader relates to this and wish they had written it - I know I do. t x
You write so well, it's as if it's our own emotions are pouring over the page A fine art Andrew Love duncan X
felt like tear drops followed each word...the tone is perfect, the poem is touching. If this is based on a real loss, I hope you find the strength to carry on..best wishes.
Andrew, very very touching, and sad, I am trully sorry for our loss.. The choice of words are excellent, god be with you..... Bonnie Collins
Very touching poetry Andrew. May time soften your deep loss and leave only the love to ever warm your heart.
a very touching poem. i know what it is to lose someone close to you. it does hurt but time does heal our wounds.
Very beautiful Andrew. the one hurt that no-one can protect themselves from. I love the poem but feel for you.
Touching. Melancholy Poem