Wednesday, January 9, 2008

A Part Of Me Died With You Comments

Rating: 5.0

I still remember heartache like
I'd never felt before,
With every hour that passes by
I miss you more and more,
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Unnikrishnan E S 15 June 2021

Touching. Melancholy Poem

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Chinedu Dike 30 October 2019

Deep sad feelings expressed in a passionate piece of poetry written with clarity of thought and mind. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing Andrew.

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Crayon Poet 23 September 2019

To say that life can occasionally be discouraging would be a barbarous understatement.

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Joe Breunig 19 June 2014

An enjoyable piece; appreciated the message and how you wove the title into each stanza; nicely done. -Joe Breunig, Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory

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Anjali Sinha 28 October 2008

A heart wrenching poem or is it a song--- whatever its touchyyyyyyyyyy ++++10 regards anjali (do read some of mine when time permits)

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Dylan Gipp 15 July 2008

That was amazing, seriously. It reallyu showed emotion on such a high scale. That was just amazing....

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Lynda Robson 27 May 2008

I can relate to this deeply touching piece, it's good to open your heart and speak of your loss, it touched me Andrew well done, Lynda xx

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Gillian.E. Shaw 23 May 2008

Sorrow, loss and pain superbly expressed here. The verse form is admirable and the whole conveys human suffering. Great Poetry!

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James B. Earley 27 April 2008

A passionate tribute to a loved one! Excellent style. You may appreciate PoemHunter's Hazelmarie Elliott. Thanks.

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Bonnie Collins 29 February 2008

Andrew this brought tears to my eyes. What a well painted picture of your broken injured heart, this is very very good please know that...... May your days be filled wiht happiness....... Bonnie Collins

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This is breathtakingly well-penned. A song, a poem? Either way it is magnificent. I bet many a reader relates to this and wish they had written it - I know I do. t x

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Duncan Wyllie 25 February 2008

You write so well, it's as if it's our own emotions are pouring over the page A fine art Andrew Love duncan X

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Konye obaji Ori 13 January 2008

felt like tear drops followed each word...the tone is perfect, the poem is touching. If this is based on a real loss, I hope you find the strength to carry on..best wishes.

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Bonnie Collins 09 January 2008

Andrew, very very touching, and sad, I am trully sorry for our loss.. The choice of words are excellent, god be with you..... Bonnie Collins

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Mary Gordley 09 January 2008

Very touching poetry Andrew. May time soften your deep loss and leave only the love to ever warm your heart.

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James Foulk 09 January 2008

a very touching poem. i know what it is to lose someone close to you. it does hurt but time does heal our wounds.

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Ann Beard 09 January 2008

Very beautiful Andrew. the one hurt that no-one can protect themselves from. I love the poem but feel for you.

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