Sunday, February 14, 2010

A Part Of Me*** Comments

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here.....i can watch my life as a movie
i saw every moment passed, , and every moment is coming
i didn't realise why i had to feel too much!
but then i knew.....
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angelica ayman
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Merna Ibrahim 18 February 2010

Good poem Angelica :) Keep writing..Thanks for sharing.

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Omar Ibrahim 18 February 2010

it'a good idea.it seems that you were so enthusiastic while writing this poem that you couldn't arrange your thoughts properly...but it's a good poem overall. thanks for sharing

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