here.....i can watch my life as a movie 
i saw every moment passed, , and every moment is coming
i didn't realise why i had to feel too much! 
but then i knew.....
                
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it'a good idea.it seems that you were so enthusiastic while writing this poem that you couldn't arrange your thoughts properly...but it's a good poem overall. thanks for sharing

 
                     
                
Good poem Angelica :) Keep writing..Thanks for sharing.