* A Part Of It We All Are Comments

a clever treatment of words. Amazing and amusing.

good words of wisdom.............well penned

You significantly stand out.....great thinking

I can hear your music playing. beautiful! thanks for sharing.: -)

a delightful lyric touched by beauty and grace

a beautiful write......... a part of it yes we are all a part of it..........

Yes indeed - - 'a part is a part and that is all ' - - we are all important and no-one is VERY important..... so well and simply written a 10 from Fay.

like a beach. it takes millions of grains of sand to make it.

Its really simple and lovely write.

Good write..........................

Samanyan I love this topic of synergy for a poem. I would someday attempt one myself but I don't know if there is anything left to be said after your nice write here. The only idea in this I don't understand is the 'killing'. If one of the parts seeks significance, can this really kill the whole entity?

Actually speaking, we are not part of it but the whole of it. 'Poornal poornamudachyade...' Let us not forget this idea. We may be reflecting only a part of it as influenced by our individual nature but it is WHOLE deep within. It is only the problem of the reflecting mirror and not the treasure that we carry. If you see the works of our great Rishis, you can see that they are WHOLE in their contents and presentation of ideas. One Vyasa is enough to represent the entire clan of Poets of all times. This is the truth.

well written poem...nice

yes, we are a part of this whole!

A part for the whole is well explained in the poem

Yes; we are only parts-...it's always better we share our parts with others...give and take i mean... You played your part very well there SLN! ...10

Another great poem Samanyan....if only everyone of us accepts that we are a part of the whole and not the only part....10

so true..ur poem talks so well abt synergy...none of us is as strong as all of us...gud write again sir...m not rating ur poems coz 10 seems too less: -)

A lovely poem you are From Truth you are not far CP

a whole has its part...a part of a whole has its significance...we are always a part of a whole so each of us has a significant or has a value of being a part of a whole..this piece of yours has a deep meaning, hope my idea is just fine dear sam..naizz