Friday, February 22, 2008

A Park Without Comments

Rating: 5.0

It has a gentle flowing river passing through it
A lovely location nestled in the middle of a city
It is a prime place for festivals in the summer
Its entrance is now gated to guests; what a pity
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Theresa Ann Moore
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Thad Wilk 22 February 2008

Another beautiful write Theresa! Thank you for sharing this capturing gem *10*! ! of wonder! Best wishes Friend Thad

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C.R. Clark 22 February 2008

Excellent poem Theresa. I can almost feel myself there as I read this. You're right, you can't improve on nature. Thanks, I love it. Richard

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Li Away 22 February 2008

i feel for you. the same thing happened to our back home coast road. i didn't like it, it seems as if they're besieging the oppeness, the horizon, the sea. very much so. nice thought!

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Theresa Ann Moore

Theresa Ann Moore

Michigan, U.S.A.
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