Tuesday, October 7, 2008

A Parent's Wish? Comments

Rating: ★5.0

Grow up little one, the world awaits…
but stay awhile first.

Grow up wise, learn to fly…
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C H Sund
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Alison Cassidy 10 October 2008

Oh, the precious first years of childhood. How poignantly and succinctly (the couplet form works superbly here) you express every parent's wish - to savor every second of their children's time at home. The repetition of 'stay awhile' in the first and final stanzas is perfect. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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C H Sund

Wahpeton, ND (USA)
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Wahpeton, ND (USA)
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