Wednesday, May 17, 2017

A Parallel Air Comments

Rating: 5.0

Our lives are cluttered
because we let our thoughts
slip from the mind's grasp
before they have closed
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Daniel Brick
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Nosheen Irfan 19 May 2017

I think everyone can relate to this superb write. To quote you, What angel or secret map will show us the way to this calm place? ...yes, we all want to find peace of mind. Living a fast urban life takes its toll. Our thoughts are often cluttered and it's hard to put two and two together. How wisely you have discussed this dilemma of mankind. A wonderful expression and a psychological approach...together they make for a perfect work. A profound work. A huge 10.

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