Friday, November 27, 2009

A Paradisiacal Evening In Winter Comments

Rating: 5.0

The twilight brings with it the clamour of the night,
The herds in its sturdy tentacles of rope,
Plods slowly in the homeward direction,
As the end of the day marks by the full moon’s shine.
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Y Sunita Devi
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Kesav Easwaran 09 December 2009

a poet's view of an evening passing life-show...very poetic Winnie...thanks...10

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i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee it. :) it is well written and booming.

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 06 December 2009

A simple and picturesque narration of a simple life full of love and joy. Nice verse.

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Carol Gall 06 December 2009

what a lovely picture your words show happiness 10

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This picturesque poem unfolds line by line bringing joy to the reader. I particularly love the 3rd stanza with the family-man returning with goodies for his family. 'Happiness happens in the juggled moments of everyday life' and this is what I found so true as when we know this, we can live for the moments and enjoy them. 10 love Karin

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