Friday, March 20, 2009

A Paradise Walk. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hazily warm this serene afternoon.
No early leaf sways around windless tree,
But what do I see shyly zooming
Around bare branches - robin, eyeing me.
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Fay Slimm
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Ashraful Musaddeq 01 June 2009

You have seen with your own eyes that have composed with your poetic fashion. You are always very different and brilliant in your works. You have captured the imageries nicely. As we read your poem, we are delighted with your work. So clear and so lively.10+++

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Kevin Wells 24 March 2009

I am a bit of a closet 'twitcher' so this was especially enjoyable for me to read. Beautifully described.

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Lynda Robson 20 March 2009

What a lovely walk it was too, if I close my eyes I can picture it so well, as always an excellent write Fay, thank you 10 Lynda xx

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Fiona Davidson 20 March 2009

Beautiful nature walk Fay...felt like I was there beside you...thank you for a great stroll...Fi 10+++

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Stephen Stirk 20 March 2009

Your descriptive vision and portrayal is flawless. This is a lovely journey. Thanks for posting Steve

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Ian Bowen 20 March 2009

Fay, really enjoyed your walk in the glorious gardens of nature.10/10 Ian

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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