Thursday, March 15, 2018

A Paradise Turns Hell - 06 Comments

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The young wife visits temples,

To pray for her husband's well being.
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Prativa Rani 16 March 2018

The young wife visits temples, To pray for her husband's well being. He attends a massage parlour. A great paradox of ethical values. Thanks for sharing. 10++++++++

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Prativa Rani 16 March 2018

The young wife visits temples, To pray for her husband's well being. He attends a massage parlour. A great paradox of ethical values. Thanks for sharing.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 March 2018

A thought provoking poem. If the husband visits a massage parlour that is a front of prostitution and he performs lascivious conduct, his soul will definitely end up in. A clever short write well written.

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Thank you dear Rose Marie for your nicely chosen words of encouragement.

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Ravi Kopra 15 March 2018

Why? All paradise in massage parlours! Her prayers well answered. She must have done good Karma in her previous life That's why she is such a wonderful wife in this life May Lord Shiva bestow on him the manliest of manhood!

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Thanks Ravi Ji for your kind remarks.

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