A Paradigm Shift Comments

The deluge will carry us all… Towards many paradigm shift -------------- I do feel your image and its linguistic approach

Anguish lines splendidly written.Good subject.Thanks for sharing

the paradigma it's style art of wonderful life

Another deep and meaningful piece of work Abha. Well done. Andrew

Profound, yes, but lucidly put across, with the controlled vocabulary, and some good imagery!

Twards Paradigm Shift is anther lovel masterpiece from a writer of your calibre.. u r a master in your own stly n class... Keep writing, Best wishes, karan

A rare philosophical picturisation in words...........

An appealing poetic analysis of a pardigm shift. I am adding my point of view as follows: Drop the dichotomy, live with One, All doubts and delusions will be done; Future and past always mislead, In the present lies the seed. Never ever let this paradigm shift, Else to angst-ridden fronts you drift.

Dichotomy picked up with a tong ....Words, attitude, feeling, love Transcend the paradigm. So surreal an avant garde --------------- I had the feeling to read Beaudrillard theory in poetry...Brillant....You have the technic to craft theory through poetic form, like the old classics.

Abha, all what I would have like to have said has been said and more. This is just simply BRILLIANT. Top marks and thanks for sharing your talent with us my friend. David

Hello poet and I enjoyed your peom, great work! Come and visit my poems when you can, LC Taylor

do we need a paradigm ab initio..i think not...but this is transient too, i dont know wat i wil think tomorrow

this is a gorgeous piece..............i'm seduced already..........

Dichotomy picked up with a tong Very winding and melodious composition Rehan

Oh this is superb! Fantastic use of language.... every line gave me more! Loved: 'Driving straight is fun But careful dive along bow bends, Trivial anticlimactic stances Breed carking differences' 'Carking' how wonderful! Rx

Ah very good use of the meanings, bringing atleast 10 means with each stanza, I salute you.

Another one of your good writes.... has alot of hidden meaning behind it... very good

Wow very intense and meaningful.I really enjoyed reading this poem and thought the word selection to be very powerful thanks Nik 10+

Your poem has a lot of depth and inner meaning. Has to be read a couple of times and pondered upon. The deluge does indeed carry us and we do not have any control. This has been happening with incredible speed with the advent of the Third Wave (as referred to by Alvin Toffler) . The shifts can be envisaged as huge ocean waves just carrying us against our will. Generations will come and generations will go but the wave will continue for ever. Take care... Leonard

This is a very witty piece, with irony at its core, perhaps the same feeling experienced by every generation who must witness the shift to the 'new' and who still hanker after the old and familiar. Generation after generation will play the same roles, experience the same uncertainties, yearn for the same futures. The only difference now is the exponential growth in the speed of it all. Your poem is thought provoking and needs to be read and re-read. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥