Friday, February 22, 2008

- A Paper Soul - Comments

Rating: 2.9

A paper soul
An empty hole
Left out in the pouring rain
Now soaked
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Dmitriy Kokarev
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Ashraful Musaddeq 29 September 2008

Wonderful composition with beautiful imagery.10+

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Chitra - 16 August 2008

great metaphor used here wonderful lines these are

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Ben Gieske 25 February 2008

I especially like the first two stanzas and the comparisons. It's true. Our souls can be like paper, torn apart and even shreded. We should be careful of others.

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Mary Gordley 23 February 2008

Wonderful poetry which conveys a melancholy mood. Thanks for writing.

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Dmitriy Kokarev

Dmitriy Kokarev

Tashkent - Uzbekistan
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