Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, March 18, 2010

A 'Papa, Please' Comments

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I couldn’t see in his eyes
When my son hardly could say bye
I felt so betrayed by his gesture
I could sense of guilt but was not sure
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Brooke Mcminn 22 March 2010

Wow, I must say that this is really good, and very touching. It is kind of how I feel, but in a different sense, if you know what I mean. This really touched my heart and I am glad that you commented me, or I might not have known to read any of your poems. Very good!

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Maria C. Pires Costa 22 March 2010

Dear hashmuk, These poignant lines have undoubtedly stirred one's feelings for the sad happenings told.The 6th stanza conveys a serious alert regarding parents and children's relationships. We have particularly enjoyed the last lines for the deep reflection they offer as well as the important advice. Take care and good luck to you and family.

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Elna Mercado 20 March 2010

my eyes grow wider, my heart beats faster......my childhood....in your lines.....tears..... as a single mom, i consciously chosen not to do as it was in my childhood but i must confess, i did....the feeling was horrifying, hunting. i have written an apology to my son when he was 13.....waited for forgiveness.....when it did, gratefulness is so sweet... parenting is very difficult and i read you struggle with that too....when we go deeper within and recognize what is going through, it become our strength and guideline for change and /or modification what we can do for the next time... you write so vividly with emotions that move a reader.

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Pradyumna Jyotir 19 March 2010

A wonderful message to parents and children alike...10+ thanks for sharing...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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