Saturday, November 21, 2009

A Pantoum (My First!) Comments

Rating: 4.8

When youthful zest sits down to dine with age
The wizened one consumes exotic fare
As youth becomes seduced by thyme and sage
One hopes they will enjoy the meal they share
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Terri Turrell
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Cd Sinex 19 January 2016

Nicely done. Rhyming Pantoums are worth the extra effort.

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Mark R Slaughter 21 November 2009

And an excellent rendition - pantoums are tricky and I've only attempted one before as well. Nice message too. Mark

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