A Pantoum- Dancing Under The Stars Comments

Lisa, this one is gorgeous, you could almost sing it as a lyric. I loved it. Top marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

This and the previous poem truly make me want to get up early to watch the sunrise and throw my arms out and twirl around... just me and God! Lovely poem. Barb

I agree with Brian-this poem does have a wonderful aura, just like the dancer. Well done!

Like the dancer, this poem has a wonderful aura... well done! ! Brian

Lisa another wonderful poem that has you feeling on top of the world, my life resembles this poem so much, brilliant work cheers Sylviex

Lisa, this one speaks to me - volumes. I know how she feels. To dance is to live! A lovely pantoon. love, Allie XX

Strange, I see her 'aloneness' but she does not seem to feel it at all. She is perfectly happy in her dancing - how charming...and well done on the form too! Good write....

For now she is alone, but not lonely She makes her own music as her heart beats in time I can not add to this, Love Duncan X

What wonderful music this poem makes. It is lovely, Lisa. Warm regards, Sandra