Friday, June 9, 2006

A Pantoum - Alone On The Hillside Comments

Rating: 5.0

As she sits alone on the hillside watching the sunrise
Silence is golden, movement is absent
Upon the grassy fields she sees shadowing darkness
The freshness in the air surrounds her intensely
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Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson
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David Harris 30 March 2007

Lisa, the imagery is well expressed here. I could visualize myself sitting on the hillside watching the sun slowly creeping up in the horizon. Beautiful, just beautiful. Top Marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Sylvia Spencer 23 June 2006

Lisa this poem has beautiful images and it is so well written, it was a pleasure to read. cheers Sylvie top marks

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Scarlett Treat 20 June 2006

Can one hear silence, or do we just teel it, deep in our hearts...that suspended feeling, waiting for dawn..how lovely.

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Duncan Wyllie 18 June 2006

What an amazingly beautiful thought, very atmospheric, Love Duncan x

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Alison Cassidy 11 June 2006

Lisa, what a lovely pantoum. Well constructed and musical. You've inspired me to have a go. Thanks. love, Alison

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Leigh A. Hill 10 June 2006

MMM! i love a good pantoum! lol this is a very interesting one, beautiful! my pantoum is called'In A Song' if you wanna read it. ive always thought the pattern was fun to follow.

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Jerry Hughes 10 June 2006

Strange, but I really like it...

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Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson

Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson

Northumberland, England
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