A Pantoum - Alone On The Hillside Comments

Lisa, the imagery is well expressed here. I could visualize myself sitting on the hillside watching the sun slowly creeping up in the horizon. Beautiful, just beautiful. Top Marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

Lisa this poem has beautiful images and it is so well written, it was a pleasure to read. cheers Sylvie top marks

Can one hear silence, or do we just teel it, deep in our hearts...that suspended feeling, waiting for dawn..how lovely.

What an amazingly beautiful thought, very atmospheric, Love Duncan x

Lisa, what a lovely pantoum. Well constructed and musical. You've inspired me to have a go. Thanks. love, Alison

MMM! i love a good pantoum! lol this is a very interesting one, beautiful! my pantoum is called'In A Song' if you wanna read it. ive always thought the pattern was fun to follow.

Strange, but I really like it...