Tuesday, May 19, 2009

A Pantheist's Prayer Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wind, blow my being hollow as a reed and fill me.
Sky, swallow me and I will lose myself blue in your space.
Sun, melt me to a moment of light.
Please, Earth, let me find refuge in your dark folds.
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Lillian Susan Thomas
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Dr Antony Theodore 16 August 2018

Sky, swallow me and I will lose myself blue in your space. my heart beats homeward....... imagination expressing the inner need .. thank u. very nice poem. tony

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An enchanting reflection from this miraculous mirror of poetry.10.

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Shashendra Amalshan 21 May 2009

very effective poetic verse...well penned...thanks..shrort, but it has great depth..thanks..

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