Monday, May 25, 2020

A Pandemic Poem: Sayonara, Poof, Kaput, Finito! Comments

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I've got a lot to say
but no words to say it with.
Lots of pain, frozen deep in my chest
yet no rays of warmth to melt it with.
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Nika McGuin
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Bri Edwards 04 October 2020

P.S. It's sometimes a relief (some at least) to get feelings 'out'. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I've got other issues which bug the heck out of my sometimes, but i don't 'have to' wear a mask often, almost never; I'm lucky! ! bri :)

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Bri Edwards 04 October 2020

There are probably TOO MANY who share your feelings; if it were just YOU, it would still be too many! ! I hope your mood has improved. PH shows you online now, so i hope this means you are getting by ok (enough) . line 13 i've been led to believe that 'till is not as acceptable* a spelling as till. but....stilllll! * " Till is not an abbreviation of until—it's actually older than until—and it should not be written with an apostrophe." to MyPoemList bri ;)

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Nika McGuin

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