A Palette Of Red And Gold Comments

Shelly, this is simply beautiful. The images come through so crystal clear it was as I was walking there. The rhythm just took you along effortlessly through the poem. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

You capture many beautiful moments in this piece with lovely imagery. Thanks for sharing.. :) Angie

Ahh this is just so sweet Shelley, two lovers nestling close, becoming one finding themselves blissfully lost in time. Beautiful, truly beautilful---Melvina---