Saturday, January 28, 2006

A Pair Of Hearts! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Windmill's blades spin so far to the right,
Tulip's petal's colored yellow and white.
Van Gogh's paintings, so colorful as bright,
Friends being friends who are loyal and
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Michael Gale
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Emma Johnson 20 March 2006

The beautiful pairing of blades, colour and brightness, friends, shoes, rain and breeze, here and there, hands, talking and strolling, etc create a a care-free atmosphere of love and leisure, but what is most interesting is the way the structure of the lines themselves reinforce this lovely pairing. Susie.

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Sandra Fowler 19 March 2006

Vivid word pictuire. Nice imagery. A fine lyric poem. Regards, Sandra Fowler

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