A Pair Of Fractured Hearts Comments

David, your first couplet is superb - brilliant images. The rest of the piece see saws between optimism and regret. You obviously write from long and varied experience. Great poetry. Great warmth. love, Allie xxxx

Well put and I fear you're more than on the mark here for there are lots of 'fractured hearts', the walking wounded as we say, on the loose...this I know above all else to be true.....it's so evident in the words of so many here...mm. {Hill? }

A pair of broken hearts, ready to make a brand new start...10