Monday, August 19, 2013

A Pair Of Eyes Comments

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Aquamarine observing mine
somewhat as periwinkle shine

Collecting treasures fantasies
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Heather Burns
son
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Queeny Gona 26 August 2013

The beauty of your poems is expressing indepth feelings, emotions, life as such painting the heart of the readers with beautiful colors dear Ma'am. This very reason keeps me intent with your poetry.

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Valsa George 21 August 2013

If your son's eyes are of acquamarine colour, he will be very handsome to look at! Blue eyes are really lovely! !

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Valsa George 21 August 2013

If your son's eyes are of acquamarine colour, he will be very handsome to look at! Blue eyes are really lovely! !

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Geetha Jayakumar 20 August 2013

Beautiful poem on dedication to son..Loved reading it...

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Poetheart Morgan 20 August 2013

Oh! Is all alright in this beautiful blue eyes!

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Tribhawan Kaul 20 August 2013

Very nice...enjoyed reading about expressive blue eyes of your son.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 20 August 2013

a portrayal with great metaphors! excellent write.

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Sekharan Pookkat 19 August 2013

Today's portion too-

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 19 August 2013

Nice poem as dedication to your son. May his future be filled with joy, happiness, and success.

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