Wednesday, July 6, 2011

A Painting Of Perfection. Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wanted to paint,
A picture of true love in colours both bright and faint,
A portrait of your beautiful face,
And your warm lips if i had the chance,
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Shamba Kaunda
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 06 July 2011

It was really a great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. Quite descriptive yet interesting. You have done a great job. Well done. Keep on writing. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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Shamba Kaunda 06 July 2011

I personally love this poem i dont know about you

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